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Re: My father's leave (revision)
This is an amazing poem. Just amazing. You used great figurative language with good precise rythm... my favorite stanza is the first: I see you curling in the smoky aftertaste ...
Apr 25, 2006
This is an amazing poem. Just amazing. You used great figurative language with good precise rythm... my favorite stanza is the first: I see you curling in the smoky aftertaste ...
Apr 25, 2006
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